Giuseppe Zanotti Frankie

Original:

"During the summer vacation, my family and I went to the beach. We had a great time playing in the sand, swimming in the ocean, and enjoying the sunshine. The weather was perfect, and we even built a sandcastle together. In the evenings, we would have a barbecue on the beach and watch the sunset. It was a relaxing and enjoyable trip that we will always remember."

Improved:

"Over the summer break, my family and I visited the beach. We had an amazing time swimming in the ocean, playing in the sand, and soaking up the sunshine. The weather was ideal, and we collaborated to construct a sandcastle. Each evening, we would gather on the beach for a barbecue and admire the breathtaking sunset. This vacation was both rejuvenating and pleasurable, and it will be cherished in our memories forever."

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